I was sitting all alone...
she came to me as though she had something special to say to me.. seeking my attention - a beautiful gurl she indeed was... the moonlight almost brought so much charm into her that she looked deadly. I was starting to belive that that beauty can really kill. She was so tempting & I wanted to touch her.. the fear of how cold she could be if I did it... or how sour she could turn out to be.. made me to stay at a safe distance..
But then as I looked at her closer I noticed she was trying to seek my attention frantically.. as though she wanted to convey something to me.. I made up my mind.. walked towards her.. and sat beside her.. I felt so cold as she slowly wrapped me.. sometimes softly.. sometimes wildly.. and I did listen to her.. I was astounded how I dint notice what she was conveying me.. after all I have been seeing her for some years now....
She said me that though on the surface she was charming.. always on the move.. always rocking.. deep inside she was so calm,, keeping within her a million secrets.. that a lot of men are still trying to ponder wat it would be...(all women are a treasure trove of secrets... i guess we will agree..)
She told me no matter how many times we fall in life.. what is important is we raise up in life... and more importantly how strong we raise up(i understood why they say "Behind/Beside every sucessful man is a caring successful and sensitive woman")
Now I was completely enchanted by her beauty and the fact that she could think and talk so sensibly.. I could not help but falling in love with her. My affair with her tought me a million things..
She was ferocious if provoked,,, her anger brought wrath,misery and destruction.. and yet she was so refreshing.... Any time I felt at loss of peace her very sight brought in so much mental peace.. strength.. wat else could I ask in love...
She had a million friends.. every one with a charachter of their own.. but eventhough every one merged with her as one.. she stood elegant , beautiful,dignified and above all she remained herself.. her charachter not changing to the least.
Years passed.. not even a sign of her aging,, yet everything coming from her had an individuality.. she had this power to transform everything coming to her just the way she was...
She is one in a million.. yet so much like the millions we see everyday.. if fate had it I would have wanted to just dissolve into her ,, but the laws of nature and society would have called it a sin.. blasphemy.. and what not...
A sudden call on my mobile woke me up from my thoughts.. my gurl says its midnight and I need to reach home... as I walk alone on her shore.. she slowly tickling my feet saying me goodbye.. I wonder what more she can teach me.. the "SEA" is so enchanting.. so real.. sometimes I confuse.. wether god created the women like the sea or the sea like a woman..
The sea is such a nice teacher... such a nice friend.. yet she has the quality for every one to fear her.. but still she pulls everyone to her.. her embrace can be so smooth..yet we keep her at safe distance...
Aint the sea such a mystrey that all of us want to unwrap.. jus sit beside her.. lend her your ears and she will teach you a million lessons in life..Look at her and you will see that in spite of all this there is some one above her who controls her.. who decides on her every movement... aint that a lesson we learn that come what may... there is always one person above us... and we are just puppets in the hands of god...
she came to me as though she had something special to say to me.. seeking my attention - a beautiful gurl she indeed was... the moonlight almost brought so much charm into her that she looked deadly. I was starting to belive that that beauty can really kill. She was so tempting & I wanted to touch her.. the fear of how cold she could be if I did it... or how sour she could turn out to be.. made me to stay at a safe distance..
But then as I looked at her closer I noticed she was trying to seek my attention frantically.. as though she wanted to convey something to me.. I made up my mind.. walked towards her.. and sat beside her.. I felt so cold as she slowly wrapped me.. sometimes softly.. sometimes wildly.. and I did listen to her.. I was astounded how I dint notice what she was conveying me.. after all I have been seeing her for some years now....
She said me that though on the surface she was charming.. always on the move.. always rocking.. deep inside she was so calm,, keeping within her a million secrets.. that a lot of men are still trying to ponder wat it would be...(all women are a treasure trove of secrets... i guess we will agree..)
She told me no matter how many times we fall in life.. what is important is we raise up in life... and more importantly how strong we raise up(i understood why they say "Behind/Beside every sucessful man is a caring successful and sensitive woman")
Now I was completely enchanted by her beauty and the fact that she could think and talk so sensibly.. I could not help but falling in love with her. My affair with her tought me a million things..
She was ferocious if provoked,,, her anger brought wrath,misery and destruction.. and yet she was so refreshing.... Any time I felt at loss of peace her very sight brought in so much mental peace.. strength.. wat else could I ask in love...
She had a million friends.. every one with a charachter of their own.. but eventhough every one merged with her as one.. she stood elegant , beautiful,dignified and above all she remained herself.. her charachter not changing to the least.
Years passed.. not even a sign of her aging,, yet everything coming from her had an individuality.. she had this power to transform everything coming to her just the way she was...
She is one in a million.. yet so much like the millions we see everyday.. if fate had it I would have wanted to just dissolve into her ,, but the laws of nature and society would have called it a sin.. blasphemy.. and what not...
A sudden call on my mobile woke me up from my thoughts.. my gurl says its midnight and I need to reach home... as I walk alone on her shore.. she slowly tickling my feet saying me goodbye.. I wonder what more she can teach me.. the "SEA" is so enchanting.. so real.. sometimes I confuse.. wether god created the women like the sea or the sea like a woman..
The sea is such a nice teacher... such a nice friend.. yet she has the quality for every one to fear her.. but still she pulls everyone to her.. her embrace can be so smooth..yet we keep her at safe distance...
Aint the sea such a mystrey that all of us want to unwrap.. jus sit beside her.. lend her your ears and she will teach you a million lessons in life..Look at her and you will see that in spite of all this there is some one above her who controls her.. who decides on her every movement... aint that a lesson we learn that come what may... there is always one person above us... and we are just puppets in the hands of god...
3 comments:
nice for a start.
the metaphor of the sea with the woman was quite impressing..keep up the good work...
A decent effort but require some more meat and potatoes.
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